Sunday, February 23, 2014

Please Don’t Take My Air Jordans Reading Response


Peer Pressure can make people to do extreme and dangerous things. Peers can pressure their friends into drinking alcohol, doing drugs, and committing crimes. The theme in Please Don’t Take My Air Jordans is about peer pressure in the speakers group of friends, and how it has led him to act materialistically in wanting nice shoes, clothes, and gear, so he can be seen as “cool,” and not be teased by his friends.  These ideas lead him to commit horrible acts of violence and crime.

            The speaker’s actions are fueled by his friends teasing him. They make him want to be perceived as “cool.”  Whenever the speaker tries to explain why he needs these nice things, he says:  “My crews laughin at me cuz I’m wearin old gear.”  (Gaines, 21) This quote shows that the speaker’s friends are pushing him over the edge and making him want the gear and clothes more.  Even when the speaker is talking himself into killing another man for his shoes, his reasoning is: “but I can’t have my posse laughin at me I’ll cop something dope just wait till you see.” (Gaines, 31-32) Without having money to buy things, he uses violence to get new shoes.

            The speaker thinks that the only way to be cool is to have new clothes. He believes that the way he looks is more powerful and admirable than how he acts or behaves.  The speaker tries to explain why he needs his gear to maintain his image.  He says: “it ain’t about bein heard just bein seen.” (Gaines, 4); and “ the reason I have to look real fly… I don’t know why… when I’m wearing fresh gear I don’t have to hide.” (Gaines, 16) These quotes show that the speaker’s clothes boost his self-confidence and he feels that they make him better than who he is inside. He doesn’t need to be heard because he feels he isn’t that interesting. But when he’s wearing clothes that people may be envious of he feels they’ll respect him for it.

            The Speaker wanted the nice clothes so bad that, instead of saving up and earning the money for them, he commits violent crimes.  The speaker says:
“(I’ll) check out my victims, hanging around… gots to get some new gear there’s no other way.” (Gaines, 26 and 28) He sees violence as the only option, since the security is so tight at the mall, preventing him from stealing clothes the way he used to.  So the speaker decides to kill a man when he hears people comment about the man’s nice Air Jordans. After he shoots him, the victim says something so shocking that the reader can truly see how bad the situation is for the main character and the people in his neighborhood.  “While he lay there dyin all he could say was please… don’t take my Air Jordans away… you think he’d be worried about stayin alive, (but when I) took off with the Jordans there were tears in his eyes.” (Gaines, 49-52)  The victim is so obsessed with his shoes that he acts like he cares more about the shoes than saving his own life, and he doesn’t care if he survives.

            Please Don’t Take My Air Jordans connects to our society in a powerful way.  These actions and feelings are still present today.  I know kids who have taken their parents money out of their wallets so they could buy nice shoes at a store.  Crimes like the one in the text are still common.  Just this year a kid was shot to death three times in the chest by another kid at the Bryant park skating rink in New York, over the victims $600 jacket. The shooter misfired and an innocent 14-year old bystander was shot in the back, and might never be able to walk again.  This issue is still present today and the poem is a great example of the dangerous affects it has.



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